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HE LOOKS LIKE HES SLEEPING!

you say hes not sleeping though its not til the end you can tell, i hadta watch it twice to c if he was awake all that time... but anyways... nice animation there... nice song... great idea...

FUCK YEAH

you hav some fuckin great animations skill there... the menu was cool, even the preloader was great... the font -Invader Zim, pretty cool.... The drawing style, very different... sorta manga(ish)....is english ur first lanuage, cos most great animators are polish or korean, never seen a western good animator.... did u do anything to the voices, like flanger or anything? very long, maybe too long... umm, u use the music vrey good.... one thing u should know, the key a great flash is music.... even it is justa background loop or like really quiet, u should always hav sumdin playing... well done on the 5th one.... hope all goes well with the next one...

LenZ responds:

I was born here, but I'm half Chinese and half American. Thanx for the review and the reason of what happen to the voices was I compress it a bit too much. U don't see an 11mins flash movie to be about 2MB here XD So this is the reason why some of the voices stinks. Well most of them are my voices too lol

FUCKING PRELOADER!

u need a preloader... i thought the person before me wrote something good soo ill keep it gion and hopefully whoever reads this continues.... "Dr. Seuss, on crack!"... Why wasnt there a preloader? the title, looks gay... The name is pretty darn lame... Wall Lunch, wtf is that dude/ette? Sound, comon get it better... animation- THERE WAS NONE, besides the writing which sometimes i couldnt read because the background picture was too dark.... You should record yaself or someone reading the poem, fiddle with it, chuck it in da flash cos i didnt get enuf time to look at the actual flash with all dat reading... but other than that well done...

CONSIDER IT BLAMMED

wyg was that shit... the only good thing was the music, not the sound jus the music... wem will people stop using programs like shit talker to speek for them? this jasta be blammed, sorry... i couldnt read some of the writing aswell....

ClockLock responds:

Well, surely it takes much more skill to talk into a microphone than to type into speakonia. So much more skill.

i dont no wat 2 say...

i just dont know what to say... besides that was shit, and its gunna get blammed!

Wanion responds:

Too bad it already passed, dumbass.

Haha, that rhymes.

WOW

didnt c that comin... rite tho, jarjar being the worst part... wel done... the preloader pic reminds me of the start of invader zim... with the 2 tallests... great stuff

congrats

everything was perfect... well done... but it needs sound real bad...

Heil Claus

I cant say anything... and if i could it wood b great... well done... ideas great... songs great... ideas great.... graphics great... ideas great... tho it somehow reminds me of Invader Zim... the episode were he makes a santa suit... but over all i liked it... do another please...

WTF DUDE

sound needsta be loader... nice loop in bkg... voices coulda been a bit faster... background and other peoples grahics werent that good... the main 3 characters graphics were good devil angel and death but others... well done however...

GREAT!

The Preloader shouldnt actually say "now preloading" say "now loading" cos some not-to-bright people dont no wat preloading is... the preloader coulda had a background... AND I WANTED THE DANCING MONKEY! beleive it or not no matter how much meg it was gunna be a dancing monkey wooda been great... the talking thing was alrite... tho it took like 7-10 seconds to change, the naked person box gag was alrite... The preloader should of had some colour cos jus black and white is boring.... and the fonts were boring... wen writing use punctuation, not justa "." at the end of EVERY SENTENCE! GRAPHICS WERE GREAT! the idea was freaking genius... but you shoulda made it smaller cos wen it zoomed in i couldnt tell if the window hadta be enlarged or ma monitor was just too small... but congratulations on such a fuckin great flash... you hav some fuckin great flash talent here.... the song was a good choice... but heres a hint- with buttons wen u break the text down until its considered in flash as a "shape" then put a 100% transparent shape behind it soo we dont havta find the exact line of the text and then keep the mouse on it and press... it makes it easier... well done though... i love it, wen u play it again the replay menu changes... the person before me wrote "i think u lost ur mind mate", i ask him "wtf is wrong with it?"... this is like a day in ma life... once again congratualtions.... this a great flash... i love it, and u for dion it... tho, if ur a guy thats a big suss.... this is the longest review i have ever made... i love this dude... how long did it take you to make? the starting with all the guys and colours isnt too good, tho by the third or probably the 7th time i played it i got used to it... i think ma monitor is too small, but i suggest make a smaller one and upgrade the preloader and stuff, please? well, i gave that a vote of 5, and im gunna do the same thing 2moro and the next day then the next... then i mite forget bout it... but i love it... u goin in fav artists and fav movies... can i add u as a ng friend? cos i dont hav any... please? pretty please witha cherry on top? please get backta me... loved it once again... with the different replay menu... GREAT!

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