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well done for a start

Well, good job on the idea... the animation wasnt really good... hilltop hoods rocks cocks... graphics- were alrite... violence nil... interactivity... meh.... it was really good surpirisingly.... hope to see more and better stuff...

MiddleFingerRings responds:

heheheh, rocks cocks... silly person! Thanks for your time

Its alrite

Well done, if you read this... The music was great with the continuess effect on the guy... The graphics was alrite, looked like it was drawn but it wasnt sorta. The animation, oh god here we go... The animation- try Frame-by-frame, cos you are good but when you just tween things it doesnt have a good effect- like when he was walking, the feet would just go back and forth and by (i think it was) every second guy he would have a half a second skip and when he moved away from the mirror. Graphics again, near the end, you should have left the sky and the grass white (since the rest is black and white, sorta). The dudes that beat him are are excellently drawn, i like how you made them. When they kicked him in the face- the blood, put atleast a darker shade of red on it (like it was a reflection or something), when hes lifting his foot off his face- you should have changed the picture of his foot, just once or twice and changed the direction he lifted it in. Well choreographed. When he gets rescued, the other guys jacket doesnt fit in with the rest of it, and again with the simple tweening (Frame-by-frame is pretty easy, its just trial and error. Also when the thing jumps up to kick the dude from behind, a simple movement when he starting descending woulda looked a lot better). When he was rescued, and outside- the hair waving, you shoulda done a coupla more frames and put a tiny actionscript to make it random. I liked the border, simple yet highly effective. Also when hes walking, and it has it veiwing his face, the closest "things" just appear, thats the time where you put it just out of the frames veiw, then tween it in... And again, when he kicks him in the face, if the guy is blurring, then whatever comes in contact with him should blur too, like the things foot... When hes sitting inside, as the "thing" is leaving, i noticed that the "thing" is soo stiff, its only his feet that are moving and they are in a continuess state, it just doesnt look natural. With those things outside, are they walking or floating? and with that, when he goes all black cosa the black thing- i the background was well transitioned but however you shouldve put a coupla MC's of scratches around and put a random location actoinscript on them, if you dont know how or where to find a tutorial I know that there is a flash somewhere on newgrounds that teaches how. The idea was great. I loved it. I dont know why they put this in goth however. I liked it alot, i watched it 7 times to pick out all those faults. But, congratulations. I loved it.. Good luck for future flashes, if you still do em, cos ppl usually learn flash and quit after a coupla years... I know I only use flashes for making friends websites and stuff like that. Well done again. this is the longest review I have written, you should feel proud... I guess... And hava nice day m8... AND THE EFFECT YOU PUT ON THE DUDE WAS GREAT! I WANNA C MORE OF IT!!!
-Bone32

notorious responds:

lol thanks for the helpful and good and long review!

FUCK YEAH

you hav some fuckin great animations skill there... the menu was cool, even the preloader was great... the font -Invader Zim, pretty cool.... The drawing style, very different... sorta manga(ish)....is english ur first lanuage, cos most great animators are polish or korean, never seen a western good animator.... did u do anything to the voices, like flanger or anything? very long, maybe too long... umm, u use the music vrey good.... one thing u should know, the key a great flash is music.... even it is justa background loop or like really quiet, u should always hav sumdin playing... well done on the 5th one.... hope all goes well with the next one...

LenZ responds:

I was born here, but I'm half Chinese and half American. Thanx for the review and the reason of what happen to the voices was I compress it a bit too much. U don't see an 11mins flash movie to be about 2MB here XD So this is the reason why some of the voices stinks. Well most of them are my voices too lol

CONSIDER IT BLAMMED

wyg was that shit... the only good thing was the music, not the sound jus the music... wem will people stop using programs like shit talker to speek for them? this jasta be blammed, sorry... i couldnt read some of the writing aswell....

ClockLock responds:

Well, surely it takes much more skill to talk into a microphone than to type into speakonia. So much more skill.

i dont no wat 2 say...

i just dont know what to say... besides that was shit, and its gunna get blammed!

Wanion responds:

Too bad it already passed, dumbass.

Haha, that rhymes.

not very good animation... GR8 SONG

I LOVE THIS SONG.... IS IT JUSTA LOOP, OR DOES IT HAVE AN ENDING? COS THE SONG ROCKS, DID YOU MAKE IT YOURSELF? COS I WANT IT! ANY-MATION, JUST SIMPLE THINGS OVER AND OVER AGAIN...

Matazone responds:

Funny, some people have said the complete opposite.

It says in the first line of the 'author's comments' section that the animation is a loop.

THAT SUCKED!

that absolutley sucked... the graphics was alrite... the story was not that good... the only good bit about it was at the end with the storm trooper... whered you get that? i want it... NOW... please... pretty please witha cherry on top... did that work? please e mail me witha link if there is one...

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

By shreiking "THAT SUCKED" like a wanna-be flamer off a 2-bit AIM knockoff....you have officially negated any chances of me being nice which includes emailing you jack shit.

Please shove your head into a toilet and stay there.

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