Bone32's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-For What It's Worth-]

really good stuff

wow... not very good animation... but, wow... that was good... sometimes the mixed mediums didnt work however... sound was great... twas good... hope to see more from you...

[Salad Fingers Karaoke]

well done for a start

Well, good job on the idea... the animation wasnt really good... hilltop hoods rocks cocks... graphics- were alrite... violence nil... interactivity... meh.... it was really good surpirisingly.... hope to see more and better stuff...

MiddleFingerRings responds:

heheheh, rocks cocks... silly person! Thanks for your time

[Geeks In Love]

well...

Dont wanna write a big review...
Graphics- great, some of it is half-assed (or just not as good as the rest)...
Style- really well done in that department...
Sound- Lemon Demon, from out of nowhere comes Lemon Demon. Band of the all-so-well known "Ultimate Showdown".
Violence- None, just as well...
Interactivity - The buttons at the end are great, well done on that...
Humor- Not much, which is a good thing for a video clip, cos then wed laugh and miss out on tha clip...
Overall I gave this 10... I loved it, well done... hope to see another one just as good or better...

[Cold Tap]

Its alrite

Well done, if you read this... The music was great with the continuess effect on the guy... The graphics was alrite, looked like it was drawn but it wasnt sorta. The animation, oh god here we go... The animation- try Frame-by-frame, cos you are good but when you just tween things it doesnt have a good effect- like when he was walking, the feet would just go back and forth and by (i think it was) every second guy he would have a half a second skip and when he moved away from the mirror. Graphics again, near the end, you should have left the sky and the grass white (since the rest is black and white, sorta). The dudes that beat him are are excellently drawn, i like how you made them. When they kicked him in the face- the blood, put atleast a darker shade of red on it (like it was a reflection or something), when hes lifting his foot off his face- you should have changed the picture of his foot, just once or twice and changed the direction he lifted it in. Well choreographed. When he gets rescued, the other guys jacket doesnt fit in with the rest of it, and again with the simple tweening (Frame-by-frame is pretty easy, its just trial and error. Also when the thing jumps up to kick the dude from behind, a simple movement when he starting descending woulda looked a lot better). When he was rescued, and outside- the hair waving, you shoulda done a coupla more frames and put a tiny actionscript to make it random. I liked the border, simple yet highly effective. Also when hes walking, and it has it veiwing his face, the closest "things" just appear, thats the time where you put it just out of the frames veiw, then tween it in... And again, when he kicks him in the face, if the guy is blurring, then whatever comes in contact with him should blur too, like the things foot... When hes sitting inside, as the "thing" is leaving, i noticed that the "thing" is soo stiff, its only his feet that are moving and they are in a continuess state, it just doesnt look natural. With those things outside, are they walking or floating? and with that, when he goes all black cosa the black thing- i the background was well transitioned but however you shouldve put a coupla MC's of scratches around and put a random location actoinscript on them, if you dont know how or where to find a tutorial I know that there is a flash somewhere on newgrounds that teaches how. The idea was great. I loved it. I dont know why they put this in goth however. I liked it alot, i watched it 7 times to pick out all those faults. But, congratulations. I loved it.. Good luck for future flashes, if you still do em, cos ppl usually learn flash and quit after a coupla years... I know I only use flashes for making friends websites and stuff like that. Well done again. this is the longest review I have written, you should feel proud... I guess... And hava nice day m8... AND THE EFFECT YOU PUT ON THE DUDE WAS GREAT! I WANNA C MORE OF IT!!!
-Bone32

notorious responds:

lol thanks for the helpful and good and long review!

[Smile!]

They put this under goth? wtf?

I liked it, the black and white. The music, continues loop... good... After he had died, the final shot of him there- that art was magnificent. However the body shape- squares... jus does not work. Nice job... AND WHAT THA FUNK WAS WITH THAT LAST BIT?!? THAT RUINED IT! JUST UTTER NONSENSE (i sound old, hehe)... Well done... Keep up the good work...

[Human]

COULDA BEEN BETTER!

i didnt quite get the point of the film... good song... great drawings... even better effects... dunno wat else to say... well done...

[Joe Zombie :: Episode 2]

looked good, but wasnt...

wtf dude/ette? as ialways say "coulda been better"... graphics coulda been better than sticks... voices, wtf dude? shit talker? comon, getta friend or sumthing... preloader coulda been better than 2 shades... but otherwise the idea is fucking great!